INTERVIEW
 with
 Poet and Writer JACQUELINE LAMON

by Wanda Coleman

       Dear Wanda: I've been meaning to contact you to let you know what  became of the BIBR (Black Issues Book Review) article [on Black  literary criticism]. As it turned out, you were pretty much the only  person who provided me with quotable material--most others responded  with monosyllables or not at all.  So I decided to refocus the  article, to discuss the need for continued critique and assessment  throughout our literary careers. My first-person essay will now be a  lead feature in the March/April issue. Jacqueline.

       Coleman and LaMon have met only online, and have spoken briefly  by phone; however, there is a connection between them that differs from  the usual literary concerns a beginning writer may nervously express  to, or boldly ask of, the mature writer--in this case, the  award-winning Coleman who has published over sixteen books and  eleven-hundred poems in her forty-year career, finds she is still  coping with the fallout from her April 2002 negative review of Maya  Angelou's A Song Flung Up to Heaven, discussed in her book “The Riot  Inside me: More Trials & Tremors (Godine, 2005). Literary criticism is  on the cultural front burner as A Million Little Pieces (James Frey  memoir), a major Oprah Books Club selection in 2003 is now found out to  be more fiction than fact, and in David Orr's recent slam of poet  laureate Billy Collins in the Los Angeles Times Book Review. The  trouble with book criticism is not confined to race, as Coleman has  maintained from the start. Here, she takes on a mentor's voice to  openly discuss some of the finer aspects of the literary critique,  commenting on the negative responses to her own work.

JL: What role does critique play in the crafting of your work?

WC: It is very important. I like to consider myself my own harshest  critic. After all these years, I have a good grasp on the mistakes I  tend to make and constantly monitor my texts for them. I edit and  correct my material sometimes as I write. I will occasionally reread a  book I've published, and cross out errors and extraneous language,  hoping one day to have it reprinted with all the corrections.

JL: Do you actively seek critique as a tool during revision or  crafting?

WC: When in a crunch, those old constructive criticisms I've received  from other writers or reviewers come in handy. I am not adverse to  having the help of another pair of eyes, or another sensibility.

JL: From whom do you seek input?  What qualities do those individuals  possess that enables them to provide you with the input you desire?

WC: When I need immediate feedback on content, or how my form is  working with my content, I run it past my book-editor, English-teacher  husband. I also have a number of colleagues and friends I can count on  when I need yet a greater distance and a deeper critique. I look for  bright individuals who are fast readers, broad or eclectic in their  tastes, like working with detail, and who are not afraid of me, or  afraid to tell me the news whether good or bad.

JL: How do you respond to the opinions of others about your work?  Does  your response differ depending on how public the forum?

WC: Since I am a literary writer, in the Bohemian tradition, most of my  reviews have appeared outside mainstream literature. Generally, the  majority of what reviews I have been lucky enough to receive have been  raves, regardless of who wrote them. Some of the articles written on me  have said things about my writing so beautifully well, that I wished I  had said them myself. I am grateful whenever anyone takes the time to  figure me out, and to do the work correctly. I jump up and down  physically, dance, whoop and stomp. I remember five troublesome reviews:

1) In the first, a 1977 review of my chapbook, the White reviewer gave me  a qualified rave as a fledgling, but unfairly questioned my  authenticity as working-class poor, a Divorced Single Mom, which I  certainly was at the time, but in my opinion that should have made no  difference in the quality of the work.

 2) In the second, the White male reviewer gave me an overall rave for Mad  Dog Black Lady, my first full book (1979), but used a profanity to  describe me. My so-called loyal publisher did not back me up when I  jammed him, and pretended not to know about it. Years later, I found  out that the review was a put-up job, and that the reviewer was a crony  of one of my publisher's stars, a "feminist" poet, someone he had sent  me to as a student in order to save her under-attended poetry class. It  was like having some moron vomit on your prom dress as you're entering  the ballroom. I'd still like to murder the bitches, except one has  already gone to God and the other is killing herself with alcohol.

3)The worst of my bad reviews was posted online in the late 90s. I did  not mind that it attacked my work, or the fact that I was considered a  poet. But it engaged in cheap shots about my appearance and clothes,  and made erroneous assumptions about my personality, doing so in the  destructively adolescent and arrogant manner of the White male wastrel,  the kind of asshole one wants to bludgeon to death. This was dirty pool  and I loathed it. I made the mistake of contacting this person,  realizing too late that in so doing I was feeding the beast its  favorite poison. This was extremely irritating, but after I saw how he  treated others on his website, I realized that discerning readers would  dismiss him, as I should have done from the gitgo.

4)The next was a 1999 mixed review of my novel Mambo Hips and Make  Believe, in Publisher's Weekly, in which the unknown reviewer unfairly  reduced and gutted the plot (actually, there was no plot), as if the  reviewer had been made queasy by it, failed to mention that I was Black  and that it was my first novel. My feeling was that I was being  skewered by the kind of warped mentality that demands eternal "uplift"  from Black writers. I dismissed this review easily, but I knew it had  ruined any chance of prizes in fiction for me and had trashed book  sales.

 5)The last was also a review of Mad Dog by a supercilious Black male  poet, on his way to being famous, who saw me as competition, who boldly  challenged my awareness of influence, and indicted me for not  sufficiently honoring my Black forebears. To me he was as retrograde as  the street "bruthas" who have criticized me for not making every poem  rhyme.

 JL: What is your definition of a “literary master”?  Does that  title enable or thwart a writer’s sense of responsibility?

WC: A literary master is a great writer (acknowledged in one way or  another by writer peers); anyone who has produced a considerable body  of work generally recognized for its craft excellence, one extremely  lengthy lifetime of work or series of works. The heady title "literary  master" may thwart a writer's sense of responsibility to himself and  his readers, particularly when, as in our society, one comes repeatedly  under pressure to perform and/or to make money.

JL: Have some poets and writers earned critical immunity?

WC: No, absolutely not. Although the manner in which the much-honored  are criticized may be mitigated by their contributions to the larger  community or society, so that any criticism occurs within an  appropriate or full context.

JL: If so, how does one achieve such status?

WC: There is no such status. No writer is above criticism, nor should  they ever be, particularly in a democratic republic. Where criticism  fails, the culture fails, and art becomes flaccid; critics become  cowards or hustlers, and a bogus aesthete may seize governance over  cultural matters, as ignorance rules, fostering dictatorships of fad  and fashion (salability the bottom line); subsequently crippling the  careers of genuine artists, obfuscating time-tested criteria, and  furthering the decline of those craft values and standards of  excellence untainted by bigotry.

JL: Why is black-on-black critique received more harshly than  white-on-black?

WC: I'm not sure this statement is entirely accurate, but it certainly  seems true judging from my perspective. Remember: Whites still have the  cultural advantages in general, and are granted authority even when  they have not earned it. This is a residual of Slavery, accepted in  part by native-born Blacks, evidence of the slave mentality at work as  it survives into the twenty-first century. The longstanding reality  that Blacks are generally regarded as inferior not only by America's  founding European immigrant population, its descendents and new  arrivals, but by Asians, Latinos and Blacks from other parts of The  Diaspora (who had better say amen or get visas punched); therefore,  should Black Americans continue to fail in their demand for social  parity, what a Black-on-Black critic has to say authoritatively (short  of " game") may forever be challenged no matter how deep the resume.  This process has been complicated by the silencing of harsh White  literary critics in the 1960s, particularly during the Black Power part  of the era. To the good, this created demands for Black literary  critics (interviewers and reviewers), as Black Arts Movement poets and  writers ("Black World"/"Third World") justly fought and schemed for our  share of the Western and World literary canon. Refusing to talk to  Whites, or to be unjustly skewered by them, became standard operating  procedure. But the baby of fair and informative critique was thrown out  with the bathwater of bias (there is no such thing as objectivity in  cultural warfare). Remember, there were no certified Blacks except  Pushkin in the Western canon at that time, and in America no Blacks, if  any women (usually one, Pearl Buck). Game was run: "No one criticizes  us without a fight or being labeled racist." The problem with such a  dictum, is that it gives birth to cliques and cabals. These groups of  writers and artists organized only against Whites at first, but as the  Civil Rights Movement fizzled (and I do mean fizzle), they began  in-fighting and working against other African Americans as well,  developing a knee-jerk method of targeting those Black voices they  could not control, as well as those who adopted positions harmful to  the majority of Blacks. They scrambled to either suppress or control  those who evolved independently of their dictates, efforts, and  influence, often neglecting to find out if the target was a turncoat or  sell-out. Postures and positions lauded in the 1960s were defused of  bombast and power by the 1980s. The Neocons and a new class of Black  academic began to emerge. By 2000, the post-war Black Boom generation  had matured, an overlapping second had graduated from college or was  surviving in the streets, still a third and fourth were on their ways  to becoming parts of this contentious equation. These new Black  American voices were the diverse (multicultural and variegated)  beneficiaries of all who had preceded them, Black, White and otherwise,  in the history of literature and writing worldwide, not just the Blacks  Arts Movement. These younger writers were beholden to the Blacks Arts  Movement, to the extent of having a broader freedom of literary  choices. But the double-edge is that such a freedom also entitled them  to enjoy, study and be influenced by an array of ethnic others: Borges,  Celan and Sexton as much as Dunbar, McKay and Langston. If Toni  Morrison and Ralph Ellison hark back to Faulkner, it is just as valid  for a contemporary Black novelist to hark back to Nabokov or Camus. In  sum, at root Black-on-Black criticism is received harshly because the  problems that have plagued us as a people during Slavery,  Reconstruction, and throughout the 20th Century, are basically still  very much with us, if in more sophisticated and subtler forms; at root,  reflecting this actuality, the literary playing field remains unlevel  despite hundreds more Black writers and reviewers, and in spite of some  very heady accomplishments by African-American writers across  demographics.

JL: Why do we take it as such a personal affront?

WC: In general, for Blacks, it is. Although I do not think the average  Black writer takes criticism as personal unless they can substantiate  the personal tie, as I did above. (If one used the same lofty criteria  for Blacks as used for Whites, there would be less than a dozen Black  writers in the state of California, for example, who can be considered  true literary writers.) Being called paranoiac is tiresome. The primary  problem for our critics and writers is that the available pool remains  relatively small. Many critics are also authors with books awaiting  critique. In some regions, the number of available Black reviewers,  etc. can still be counted on one hand. Our "peculiar" circumstances  (Black History Month, MLK's Birthday, Juneteenth; public forums after  every scandal and every riot) bring us into contact more often than our  White counterparts. Our frequent organizings (hustle factor) of our  finest representatives, and our overall continued push for social  equality, causes us to constantly recycle everyone available. [When the  primary motive is to fill a politically correct agenda, be it left,  right or moderate, a science fiction writer will do as well as a poet,  a journalist as well as a novelist; an amateur who has self-published  will do was well as a Pulitzer Prize Winner.] In so doing, many of us  come into contact, and often conflict. We are as entitled to dislike  one another as we are to embrace one another. However, if an editor,  regardless of race, wants to be fair, and assign a book for review, the  odds are very high that the writer selected has had some form of social  conflict, personal encounter or even sexual intercourse with the  selected author. Thus, availability, quantity, and the quality of that  quantity become serious mitigating factors. Most Whites are blind to  the in-fighting and ideological differences between Black writers and  critics, or if not blind, indifferent. This makes painful and unfair  assessments and assignments inevitable. Too, because of the severe  dearth of courageous, independent Black critics, and the dearth of  publications and periodicals that will review their books, even online,  once a critic has reviewed a given author, the mere fact of HAVING DONE  that review automatically makes them an expert on said author, whether  the critic wants to claim expertise or not. Not to forget, there is the  occasional jealous writer, or user, who deliberately cultivates a  personal relationship with a noted author in order to later engage in  character assassination, to establish their own career on another's  back, as James Baldwin so engaged Richard Wright.

JL: Any other thoughts on the subject?

WC: The news is so-so for dominant culture writers, but depressingly  bad for "ethnic others." The appropriation of book reviews by  television and movie personalities, who are basically pedestrian in  their literary tastes, if not stunningly ignorant, is one of the great  tragedies of our time; as is "the mainstreaming" of book awards; as is  the silencing of dissent. Other tragedies include removing the tax  shelter for publishers (circa 1979) that allowed books to appreciate in  value; the ceding of litigation brought against the book chains in the  mid 90s by independent bookstores; the promotion of a "paperless"  world; the deaths of independent newspapers and magazines. The ultimate  tragedy is that in an America where free speech is more mythic than  actual, and where thought control is enforced by the complex erasures  and machinations of faith-based bigotry, all writers of quality will  suffer, but Black literary writers will most likely never obtain full  parity in those parts of the culture where literary criticism and book  reviews matter.

October 26, 2005

© Wanda Coleman